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Inge Snip's avatar

omg writing dialogue is so hard for me but you nailed it, with such great humor too! the pacing between robert and clyve had me grinning, subscribed and definitely reading on!

E. D. Jones's avatar

Right on! Thanks for the good words! :)

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Putting this back on the homepage to entice people to upgrade.